写英文求职信应注意的细节问题

概要：求职信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为不宜用分词子句。如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。Replyingtoyouradvertisement……Answeringyouradvertisement……Believingthatthereisanopportunity……Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourcompany……Havingreadyourad……再比较下列三句。(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得较恰当。A：(1)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsalesmanager……(2)InapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanagerIoffermyqualifications,whichIbelievewillmeetyourexactingrequirements.B：(1)Ibelieveafterreadingyoura

求职信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为不宜用分词子句。如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。

Replyingtoyouradvertisement……Answeringyouradvertisement……Believingthatthereisanopportunity……Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourcompany……Havingreadyourad……

再比较下列三句。(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得较恰当。

A：(1)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsalesmanager……

(2)InapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanagerIoffermyqualifications,whichIbelievewillmeetyourexactingrequirements.

B：(1)IbelieveafterreadingyouradvertisementinthismorningsJournalthatyouhavejusttheopportunityIamlookingfor.

(2)youradvertisementinthismorningsJournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptsmetoofferyoumyqualificationsforthisposition

C：(1)HavingreadyouradvertisementintheNewYorkTimesforanaccountant,Ithoughtyoumightbeinterestedinmyapplication.

(2)Inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofacompetentperson,withthoroughtraininginthefieldofcostaccounting.Pleaseconsidermeanapplicantfortheposition.HerearemyreasonsforbelievingIamqualifiedforthiswork.

求职的在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似的句子：

A：Ihesitatetostateadefinitesalary,but,aslongasyouhaverequestedmeto,Ishouldconsider6,500amonthsatisfactory.我对待遇总是无法定下确切数目，但既然您要我说明，我认为月薪六千五百元就满意了。

B：AlthoughitisdifficultformetosaywhatcompensationIshoulddeserve,Ishouldconsider******amonthafairinitialsalary.虽然我很难说待遇应该是多少，我认为每月******起薪合适。

C：Ifeelitispresumptuousofmetostatewhatmysalaryshouldbe.Myfirstconsiderationistosatisfyyoucompletely.However,whileIamservingmyapprenticeship,Ishouldconsider*****amonthsatisfactorycompensation.我不敢冒昧提出起薪是多少。最初我仅想如何做好工作，使您满意。在学徒（试用）期间，月薪*****即可。

提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用。

A：Asforsalary,Idonotknowwhattosay.Would$4,500amonthbetoomuch?至于起薪，我不知怎么说，月薪四千五百元会不会太多？

B：DoyouthinkIshouldbeaskingtoomuchifIsaid5000dollarsamonth?若要求月薪五千元，会不会太高？

C：YouknowwhatmyservicesareworthbetterthanIdo.AllIwantisalivingwage.对我工作的价值您比我更清楚。我能够糊口即可。

求职信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为不宜用分词子句。如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。

Replyingtoyouradvertisement……Answeringyouradvertisement……Believingthatthereisanopportunity……Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourcompany……Havingreadyourad……

再比较下列三句。(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得较恰当。

A：(1)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsalesmanager……

(2)InapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanagerIoffermyqualifications,whichIbelievewillmeetyourexactingrequirements.

B：(1)IbelieveafterreadingyouradvertisementinthismorningsJournalthatyouhavejusttheopportunityIamlookingfor.

(2)youradvertisementinthismorningsJournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptsmetoofferyoumyqualificationsforthisposition

C：(1)HavingreadyouradvertisementintheNewYorkTimesforanaccountant,Ithoughtyoumightbeinterestedinmyapplication.

(2)Inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofacompetentperson,withthoroughtraininginthefieldofcostaccounting.Pleaseconsidermeanapplicantfortheposition.HerearemyreasonsforbelievingIamqualifiedforthiswork.

求职的在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似的句子：

A：Ihesitatetostateadefinitesalary,but,aslongasyouhaverequestedmeto,Ishouldconsider6,500amonthsatisfactory.我对待遇总是无法定下确切数目，但既然您要我说明，我认为月薪六千五百元就满意了。

B：AlthoughitisdifficultformetosaywhatcompensationIshoulddeserve,Ishouldconsider******amonthafairinitialsalary.虽然我很难说待遇应该是多少，我认为每月******起薪合适。

C：Ifeelitispresumptuousofmetostatewhatmysalaryshouldbe.Myfirstconsiderationistosatisfyyoucompletely.However,whileIamservingmyapprenticeship,Ishouldconsider*****amonthsatisfactorycompensation.我不敢冒昧提出起薪是多少。最初我仅想如何做好工作，使您满意。在学徒（试用）期间，月薪*****即可。

提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用。

A：Asforsalary,Idonotknowwhattosay.Would$4,500amonthbetoomuch?至于起薪，我不知怎么说，月薪四千五百元会不会太多？

B：DoyouthinkIshouldbeaskingtoomuchifIsaid5000dollarsamonth?若要求月薪五千元，会不会太高？

C：YouknowwhatmyservicesareworthbetterthanIdo.AllIwantisalivingwage.对我工作的价值您比我更清楚。我能够糊口即可。

求职信要发挥最大的效果，语气必须肯定、自信、有创意而不过分夸张，如能事先了解雇主的喜好，或其他人格特点，根据物以类聚的原理，求职信如果能迎合雇主的特点，求职的人一定可以比其他人占上风，获得面谈的机会。

注意下面句子中语气的不同：

A：IthinkthatIshouldprobablymakeagood*****foryou.我想我可能成为贵公司的优秀的员工。

B：IamconfidentthatmyexperienceandreferenceswillshowyouthatIcanfulfilltheparticularrequirementsofyour*****position.我想信我的经验和别人对我的推荐可以使您充分了解我符合贵公司*****一职的需要。

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